You’ve slaved away for years to get published, and it’s happened at last. But now, someone wants to make loads of changes to your baby! Working with an editor on your first fiction book isn\u2019t always easy, but it doesn\u2019t have to be a pain.<\/p>\n
Based on our experience, here are some practical tips and takeaways to encourage new authors to see their editor as an expert collaborator rather than a fault-finding arbiter \u2013 and to find ways to work together for your book\u2019s benefit.<\/p>\n
Ensure early on that you and the editor share the same vision for the book, that you agree on the genre, who its readers are, and what its core themes are. Explain what you see as the essential elements of the book: aspects of the plot, structure, voice or characters that you can\u2019t imagine doing without. Then, see how your understanding chimes with theirs.<\/p>\n
If you can establish some common ground at this stage, it will make future editorial negotiations much easier. But listen to their thoughts, too. They may well have seen things in your book that you didn\u2019t, and they may have ideas for changing the book, which, even if they\u2019re on the radical side, would actually improve it.<\/p>\n
It\u2019s easy to get \u00a0attached to something as personally significant and intensively wrought as a novel, but don\u2019t lose sight of the fact that the editor is on your side. They are not there to mark your work up to be cruel, but share the same goal as you: to delight the reader.<\/p>\n
Remember that your book doesn\u2019t really exist until other people read it, and your editor is schooled in making that experience a positive one for your audience. And, they bring a valuable dispassionate perspective to your work at a point when you may struggle to see your work with any objectivity. As someone coming to the book afresh, the editor is able to offer an overall perspective that the author, who has been working on it on a detailed level, often isn\u2019t.\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n Remember that an editor is likely to be abreast of market trends \u2013 what people are reading, what\u2019s selling well, current political sensibilities and taboos, the likes and dislikes of top reviewers, bloggers and others who can help make your book successful. Welcome this expertise! It\u2019s a big part of what the publisher is bringing to the table.<\/p>\n It sounds obvious that editors will in fact edit things, but some writers harbor the belief that \u2013 although everyone else\u2019s work needs tweaking \u2013 theirs will probably just sail through the process. This never happens. Editors spot things that you don\u2019t, save you from yourself, and are detached and experienced enough to know what works.<\/p>\n For example, the editor of\u00a0my debut short story collection<\/a>\u00a0spotted that I had massively overused the word \u201cguffaw\u201d throughout my stories, that too many of my characters had similar names, and that some of the scenarios in the story were, when read as a whole, too samey. In every case, I am so glad she spotted these things, and much else besides!<\/p>\n There may be an aspect of the book that you consider to be utterly nonnegotiable, such as a key turning point, the death or survival of a character, or even the inclusion of a major character. And then the editor suggests an alternative that changes everything! Sometimes a character has been hanging around from the start \u2013 maybe even one of the protagonists \u2013 and they\u2019re just not pulling their weight in the narrative, or they could be combined with another character to simplify things. Your natural instinct is to argue your case, but it\u2019s better to consider the alternative rather than automatically reject it. In the long run, your book may thank you.<\/p>\n Writers often have a strong reaction when the first version of the manuscript comes back. They have worked so hard to get the story to that point that it\u2019s easy to feel that the work is done and the editing is just a formality.<\/p>\n But remember that it takes several steps to get a book to its best place, many of which you have already been through: showing your book to beta readers, taking on feedback from family and friends, reading out sections to a writers\u2019 group, making more edits for an agent. Every step helps to improve your book. The editor is there to bring it all together and add the final polish. So don\u2019t take it personally when the comments and changes come back. It\u2019s all part of the process.<\/p>\n Like your editor, you are probably in love with language, and over time you\u2019ve developed a list of words to use or avoid, points of grammar and style that you would never write, the right and wrong ways to do things. We see all of these as immutable rules, and other people\u2019s rules are mere prejudices, even though many of these strictures \u2013 such as the comma splice, the preposition at the end of the sentence, beginning a sentence with \u201cand,\u201d split infinitives, and all the rest \u2013 do not stand up to\u00a0expert scrutiny<\/a>.<\/p>\n Inevitably, the two of you will disagree about various points of style and language. Let go of the idea that you are always right, and that you know best because it\u2019s your book. Reflect on the experience and wisdom of the person who\u2019s working to polish your book. Think twice before you have a temper tantrum about a comma. Do you really know best? And does it really, in the grand scheme of things, matter? Save your pushbacks for the things that really do.<\/p>\n A writer can be tempted to see the editor as a killjoy who comes in and removes all the flair from their work. Nothing could be further from the truth. Editors are creative people who are highly skilled in working with someone else\u2019s writing. They are not interested in imposing their own vision or applying petty rules for the fun of it, but in helping your work shine. Many editors are experienced writers, too, which only adds to the value of their insights into character, structure, plot, pacing and more.<\/p>\n As the author, you are naturally inclined to retain as much of your original manuscript as possible in the final book. It is, after all, the product of months of hard work. Consequently, you\u2019ll do whatever it takes to shoehorn every passage in, even if they no longer fit with where the story eventually went. The editor will disagree, and you need to accept the hard truth that sometimes\u00a0darlings must be taken out<\/a>.<\/p>\n Many small matters can be dealt with by email or on a shared Google Docs file. But if there\u2019s any serious discussion to be had, it\u2019s always better to do it over the phone and avoid misunderstandings, grievances, or causing offense. Putting things like this in writing inevitably escalates a problem, whereas on a call, there\u2019s much more scope for a healthy debate.<\/p>\n There may be times when you really struggle to accept some feedback, perhaps because it\u2019s a section you\u2019re especially proud of, though this may be the problem \u2013 a darling that needs to be murdered. If you\u2019re struggling to get on board with a change or comment, remember you don\u2019t have to fire back a response straight away. Take a moment to cool off, get away from the screen, and do something completely different \u2013 go for a walk, have a bath, or do some cleaning. Give yourself time and distance from the project \u2013 a night if possible \u2013 so you can come back with a fresh perspective the next day.<\/p>\n Editors have to be very organized and efficient, and they are likely to have other projects they are working on as well as other commitments on their plates. So let them set the timetable and make sure you hit your milestones.<\/p>\n Always bear in mind during disagreements that the editor is just trying to do their job. They have a vested interest in the book\u2019s success, so always be friendly and courteous. Remember that the editor represents the publisher, who you want to be 100% behind both the book and you when it launches. If you have a disagreement, be pragmatic. Try to find a compromise that will allow you both to climb down from your opposing positions and fine-tune a solution.<\/p>\n If you\u2019re lucky, your relationship with your editor is something that lasts much longer than just your first book. If you\u2019re lucky, it might last for your whole writing career \u2013 or the rest of their editing career. An editor that you trust to improve your work and save you from all your writing foibles is a very valuable person to have on your side.<\/p>\n An editor wants to work with someone whose writing they admire, but who is also easy to deal with since the process can be an intense period lasting weeks, with emails and calls between you on a daily basis. So make yourself easy to get on with. Be organized in responding to queries, listen respectfully to their notes, and stay courteous and professional at all times.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"template":"","categories":[23,16,19,18],"acf":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/refiction.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/articles\/1108"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/refiction.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/articles"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/refiction.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/articles"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/refiction.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/1110"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/refiction.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1108"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/refiction.com\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1108"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}Editors Know the Business<\/h2>\n
Accept the Potential for Changes\u00a0<\/strong><\/h2>\n
Keep an Open Mind<\/h2>\n
Don\u2019t Take it Personally \u2013 Respect the Process<\/h2>\n
Pick Your Battles\u00a0<\/strong><\/h2>\n
Recognize that Editing is a Creative Craft<\/h2>\n
Be Amenable to the Death of Your Darlings<\/h2>\n
Answer the Phone<\/h2>\n
Cool Off<\/h2>\n
Be Respectful of Your Editor\u2019s Time<\/h2>\n
Be Pragmatic<\/h2>\n
Invest in the Creative Chemistry<\/h2>\n